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by Frederick L Clemens
Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:21 am
Forum: Feldgrau Published Authors
Topic: Feldgrau Author: Stephan Hamilton
Replies: 228
Views: 153243

Re: Bloody Streets: The Soviet Assault on Berlin, April 1945

Unit Names Writing about foreign militaries in a second language forces one to make decisions about translating rank, names, etc. There are a number of considerations to keep in mind, including accuracy, readability, authentic flavor, the expertise of your target audience, and the support of the pub...
by Frederick L Clemens
Thu Jan 01, 2009 9:52 am
Forum: Campaigns and Battles
Topic: Battle at Mokra,Poland
Replies: 34
Views: 25443

Re: Battle at Mokra,Poland

Nice collection of pics.
by Frederick L Clemens
Thu Jan 01, 2009 9:50 am
Forum: Books and Reviews
Topic: Steve Zaloga--Is He a Competent Author?
Replies: 85
Views: 31033

Re: Steve Zaloga--Is He a Competent Author?

... Also had a lovely book Zaloga did on Ardennes with best pictures of us armd inf (a point of interest with me) but I sent it to my brother and while awaiting his attention in a box on his porch it got wet and disintegrated. Thanks post office!.. You pay the post office to deliver, not to babysit...
by Frederick L Clemens
Wed Dec 31, 2008 6:27 am
Forum: Feldgrau Published Authors
Topic: Negotiating the Most Favorable Terms with Publishers
Replies: 32
Views: 34340

Re: Negotiating the Most Favorable Terms with Publishers

...Doing your own book requires knowledge and contacts of a lot of other aspects for book selling/distribution, etc. Unlike the "old days" this can be done at less cost with new technology and the ability to print books one at a time if needed. It also allows corrections or additions at a...
by Frederick L Clemens
Mon Dec 29, 2008 11:25 am
Forum: Feldgrau Published Authors
Topic: Negotiating the Most Favorable Terms with Publishers
Replies: 32
Views: 34340

Re: Negotiating the Most Favorable Terms with Publishers

...I have most experience with aviation magazines and to be frank, most of the reviews are quite worthless. ... Further on that note - I remember that there was a "review " of my book published before the book was finished. Obviously, many magazines simply reprint the publisher's advance ...
by Frederick L Clemens
Mon Dec 29, 2008 7:13 am
Forum: Feldgrau Published Authors
Topic: Negotiating the Most Favorable Terms with Publishers
Replies: 32
Views: 34340

Re: Negotiating the Most Favorable Terms with Publishers

That's great info, Mark! :up: I am helping a friend edit his own book for the reasons you mentioned - if you are an expert on an obscure topic, how can you trust a stranger to edit the material properly? Even slight changes in wording can really ruin the point you were trying to make. I think the be...
by Frederick L Clemens
Sun Dec 21, 2008 6:47 am
Forum: Feldgrau Published Authors
Topic: Feldgrau Author: Stephan Hamilton
Replies: 228
Views: 153243

Re: Bloody Streets: The Soviet Assault on Berlin, April 1945

Yes, I did see the plagiarism charges by Ryan against Ambrose. Without going into detail here (it's easy to research on the internet), it seems to have revolved around just a couple of quotes and, in the end, seemed more like a case of sloppiness. I think Ambrose's case against Ryan's manipulations ...
by Frederick L Clemens
Fri Dec 19, 2008 8:52 am
Forum: Feldgrau Published Authors
Topic: Feldgrau Author: Stephan Hamilton
Replies: 228
Views: 153243

Re: Bloody Streets: The Soviet Assault on Berlin, April 1945

I realize this is a side topic, but for those of you interested in Bloody Streets, I'm sure you are interested in its predecessor The Last Battle as well, so I think it is safe to continue in this thread. I mentioned criticisms of The Last Battle before. I'm not Ryan's first critic, in fact Stephen ...
by Frederick L Clemens
Fri Dec 19, 2008 7:33 am
Forum: Books and Reviews
Topic: Steve Zaloga--Is He a Competent Author?
Replies: 85
Views: 31033

Re: Steve Zaloga--Is He a Competent Author?

michael kenny wrote:Not free but as good as !

http://www.merriam-press.com/search.aspx?find=L72
Thanks for posting that.
by Frederick L Clemens
Thu Dec 18, 2008 9:19 am
Forum: Feldgrau Published Authors
Topic: Negotiating the Most Favorable Terms with Publishers
Replies: 32
Views: 34340

Re: Negotiating the Most Favorable Terms with Publishers

I'm interested in hearing about follow-on rights, such as future print runs, new editions, translations, and MOVIES!!! I know one well-known author whose books have been published in translation in Germany - for which he received no money due to the contract. It is my understanding that you can limi...
by Frederick L Clemens
Thu Dec 18, 2008 8:18 am
Forum: Feldgrau Published Authors
Topic: Feldgrau Author: Stephan Hamilton
Replies: 228
Views: 153243

Re: Bloody Streets: The Soviet Assault on Berlin, April 1945

I must concede I fall into this trap too. I want the reader to imagine he or she is in the room or observing the scene, although I base my descriptions on contemporary photographs and eyewitness descriptions to make it as authentic as possible. Fingers crossed I never invented anything, but I am a ...
by Frederick L Clemens
Thu Dec 18, 2008 6:47 am
Forum: Feldgrau Published Authors
Topic: Feldgrau Author: Stephan Hamilton
Replies: 228
Views: 153243

Re: Bloody Streets: The Soviet Assault on Berlin, April 1945

Ryan's screwup with the sunrise in Berlin, also reminds me of O'Donnell's book "The Berlin Bunker". O'Donnell, another journalist dabbling in history, loved to add scenery details - like the moon shining brightly over the ruins as such-and-such party was making their escape from the Bunker...
by Frederick L Clemens
Wed Dec 17, 2008 6:16 pm
Forum: Feldgrau Published Authors
Topic: Feldgrau Author: Stephan Hamilton
Replies: 228
Views: 153243

Re: Bloody Streets: The Soviet Assault on Berlin, April 1945

As a follow-up to my criticism of Ryan - - the dialogue that I referred to earlier that is a bit too overly re-imagined for my taste actually is in the early section on Guderian and Heinrici. - here's one example of a "fudged fact" from Ryan: First Sentence, Page One - "In the Norther...
by Frederick L Clemens
Wed Dec 17, 2008 11:09 am
Forum: Feldgrau Published Authors
Topic: Feldgrau Author: Stephan Hamilton
Replies: 228
Views: 153243

Re: Bloody Streets: The Soviet Assault on Berlin, April 1945

Fred - That was certainly an interesting comment. Can you please provide some examples? Yeesh, why can't a guy just make wild accusations without all these questions being thrown at him! :roll: Okay, with the aid of a rusty memory and no book in hand, I recall that Ryan had scenes in which characte...
by Frederick L Clemens
Wed Dec 17, 2008 8:07 am
Forum: Feldgrau Published Authors
Topic: Feldgrau Author: Stephan Hamilton
Replies: 228
Views: 153243

Re: Bloody Streets: The Soviet Assault on Berlin, April 1945

It's nice to see a lively thread! Here's my unsolictied reaction to the latest (and previous) points of debates - "Bloody Streets" is hardcore military history, "The Last Battle" is journalistic military history. Cornelius Ryan fudged a lot of facts, fabricated dialogue, and deli...